Author’s Plan for the Stories

General Plan for the Stories:

First, I will prove that I am a good storyteller that doesn’t disappoint. The way I define “a storyteller that doesn’t disappoint” is someone who’s stories start very good, continue being very good all the way through, and finish with an amazing ending. The best way to prove something (anything) is to do it and leave it recorded for others to see. If I wanted to prove I was good at a sport (for example) I would take a video of myself showing that the team is winning because of me and that I am doing an incredibly good (pro level) performance. I would take those videos several times as well, just to show that I wasn’t just having one “lucky day.” The way to do this for stories is writing long and awesome stories that everyone can read. However, both books and series take a long time to plan, write, and edit, so in my case, showing that I am a great storyteller that produces epic stories over and over and over again will only happen with time. It will take me a few years before it is proven without a shadow of a doubt. Then, I will start with my top stories, which are even better than the initial ones, but by that time no one that read any of the previous stories will have a single doubt in their mind about my ability to deliver another epic story…

The initial ones, which I call my “practice phase,” are extensions to some of the most popular stories in the world (at the point of this writing). They are The Matrix Revelations (a fourth movie for The Matrix Saga), The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf (an anime series of 84 episodes, which is an alternate prequel-sequel to the Naruto anime series, focused on Minato’s father), and Heroes of the Survey Corps: Alex Emmerson (my new prequel for Attack on Titan).

For my practice phase, I decided to extend existing and popular stories because the people that experienced those will be able to judge my sequels and extensions against the original ones as well. Therefore, they will be able to judge not just the caliber of the new stand-alone story and my writing, but also how well I continued the previous famous stories and whether I surpassed them or not with my sequels. This is why I chose extensions of famous shows for my practice. It wasn’t a coincidence… After those, I will just focus on my original stories, but I know that even the fanfiction is going to be great.

So far, I finished The Matrix Revelations, but I need to edit it once more, and I plan to do the remaining episodes for the earth sage’s Season 2 (episodes 54-84), the Attack on Titan prelude, and the “End of the Matrix” sequel for The Matrix Revelations… So, I am still in the practice phase, and the best has yet to come… ; )

I do plan to start with the original stories at some point in 2018 though.

I will probably choose to publish a book of 10 short stories first, just to test how the entire publishing process functions. And yes, it will be a book of 10 superb short stories, so don’t think I am not going to write something good because it is a test.

Later, I will do my first original book. I am still deciding whether it will be the adventure-fantasy story or the science-fiction adventure… Both are great. I’ll see which one I do first when I get there… For now, I should complete the fanfiction series and finish my training.

 

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Author’s Plan for the Stories

Author’s Journey (or initiation, but “journey” sounds more epic ^_^ )

Beginning of author’s storytelling journey:

I know several amazing stories, which can be turned into great series, great books, great movies, or even superb videogames (which would cause a lot of talking among their players due to their stories). Since I am no movie director, no master of drawing (like the most popular manga authors), and definitely not a trained game developer, I decided that I only had one medium available to transfer my epic stories to other people… Guess what it was… That medium is writing. I am no master writer either, but I always felt confident about my ability to write my stories in a very interesting and entertaining manner. So, that was what I began doing at the end of 2014. However, I had no training, so I realized that it wasn’t wise to start with my best stories at that point. It was better to start with stories that I considered good and stories that were appropriate “practice materials” to put my writing and storytelling skills to the test—and to improve them as well.  It may surprise you that the stories that I was thinking about were “The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf” and, later on, “The Matrix Revelations.” Fanfiction was clearly the best place to start my training, I thought…

Ultimately (after about 1200 pages of writing, planning, thinking, and doing much more for what were supposed to be just “practice stories”), I realized that I was wrong for thinking that they were mere “fanfiction practice.” They came out FAR better than what I originally expected and they made me realize that I really have what it takes to produce amazing stories…

Who knows, I may be able to revolutionize the sci-fi and adventure genres with what I have in mind with my original stories (in the long-run, obviously; this takes tons of time).

 

 

 

Author’s Journey (or initiation, but “journey” sounds more epic ^_^ )

Author’s Comment #25

I am planning to make a few changes that will improve the stories in this blog, and, the whole blog…

I have improved as a writer in the last few years. The other day I picked up “The Story of the Earth Sage of the Leaf,” which began in this blog 3.5 years ago, and I found several mistakes in episode 2, and at least a couple of grammatical errors in episode 1. I edited those and improved them a little by removing those errors from the writing.

I am planning to do the same for all the other 100 posts in this blog—little by little.

Then, when I finish that, I am going to continue with the earth sage’s story. And I will finish it ( I left it at episode 51 and it has 84 in total; I want to finish it because the ending for that story was really epic ).

I will also organize the main link at the top of this page (the one with the wordpress “W” symbol). That link takes you to the post where I have the links for everything I have done so far in an organized manner. So, if you want get to, say, episode 3 of “The End of the Matrix,” or Part 5 of “The Matrix Revelations,” or episode 34 of “The Story of the Earth Sage of the Leaf,” you would NOT have to scroll down like crazy to try and find them among the hundreds of posts here; you can just go to that top link and look for the section that has the links for the specific story and the particular chapter or episode that you want. It will be very easy and straightforward.

In order to accomplish that level of organization in a single link above, I am going to have to create a few new posts here just for that purpose. Later, I can come back to those and edit them by adding a new link to a new chapter or episode. However, you would have access to everything nicely, easily, and very quickly at the top of the page. And the best part is that a change I make here to these posts makes the change everywhere else too (for example, if I post one of these at facebook and I edit it here months later, the facebook users get the updates automatically, without doing or editing anything in facebook).

I am also planning to write the fanfiction series in parallel. What I mean by this is that I will do one episode for “The End of the Matrix,” then one episode for “Heroes of the Survey Corps: Alex Emmerson,” and last, one episode for “The Story of the Earth Sage of the Leaf.” After that, I would repeat the process; so I would be advancing all the series at once, instead of leaving two of them in the dust, until the other is done. (That’s basically what happened with the earth sage’s story. I left it on a long hiatus after I focused on The Matrix Revelations.)

So, do not worry when I post the first episode for the AoT (Attack on Titan) prelude next. I plan to continue with another episode for the last Matrix story right after that. I will switch among the 3 fanfiction series (1 episode for each), until they are done. I plan to do all three of them.

After that I will start with the original series, which I plan to publish. So for those, I would share a few of the beginning chapters and sell the complete series as a book. Also, I plan to post those in a new blog that will be dedicated to original stories only. This blog right here is going to be the blog for practice and high-quality fanfiction. And don’t be fooled by the word fanfiction; my “fanfiction” for these existing series shows the same quality of storytelling that I plan to continue improving upon as I go on.

By the way, if anyone has some interesting question for me, or even some question about the stories, you can go to the Youtube link above and send me a message there or you can message me at authorpedrocristobal@gmail.com.

If you send me a good question I might even answer it with a Youtube video ^_^

I’m very serious about letting the fans see how I think and what I have done from the start. I’m also fine with critiques and any opinions. I am very open-minded when it comes to storytelling. The final goal however is to deliver experiences that are wonderful, in terms of plot, characters, beginnings, endings, life lessons, and entertainment in general.

But to get there a lot has to be done in the way. What comes now in that path is organizing this place, so I am going to have to post some entries next that are ONLY meant to help me with that overall organization, which will be available here after I’m done:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2017/11/02/all-in-1-post-author-pedro-cristobal/

 

Author’s Comment #25

ALL-in-1 Post (Author Pedro Cristobal)

Quick Links for ALL the Stories:

 

ORIGINAL STORIES (including sci-fi thriller “Project H”):

https://authorpedrocristobal.wordpress.com/original-stories/

^^Many more awesome original stories will arrive at the link above, in the main blog. This one is the blog for great fanfiction. To see the main blog go to: https://authorpedrocristobal.wordpress.com/

To see the rest of the epic fanfiction series just check them out below ; )

 

> The Matrix Revelations (a 4th and awesome movie for The Matrix Saga)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2017/11/02/the-matrix-revelations-complete-story-extras-a-truly-epic-sequel-for-the-matrix-revolutions/

> The End of the Matrix (a 5th and final movie for The Matrix Saga; also, a great sequel for The Matrix Revelations)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/links-for-the-end-of-the-matrix-sequel-to-the-matrix-revelations/

 

> The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf (the story of Naruto’s grandfather: Jim Namikaze, the earth sage of The Leaf)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/links-for-the-story-of-the-earth-sage-of-the-leaf/

 

> Heroes of the Survey Corps: Alex Emmerson (the story of what happened right before Season 1 of Attack on Titan—a great prelude!)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/16/all-the-links-to-the-episodes-for-heroes-of-the-survey-corps-alex-emmerson-in-1-place/

 

> Star Wars: The New Jedis (An alternate story for Episode VIII in the Star Wars Saga; it includes 2 of the best lightsaber duels in the entire saga)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2016/01/17/short-story-1-star-wars-episode-viii-fan-made-movie-script/

 

 

The sites by Pedro Cristobal:

https://authorpedrocristobal.wordpress.com/the-fun-fiction-book-club/ (Pedro Cristobal’s book club, which is focused ONLY on fiction books that are very entertaining.)

https://www.facebook.com/groups/2084381325141529/ (The FUN Fiction Book Club’s Facebook Page. Join to befriend other readers that enjoy entertaining stories.)

https://authorpedrocristobal.wordpress.com/  (This is Pedro Cristobal’s official blog. The original stories will be shared here; and interesting articles will be posted as well.)

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCj56IskspnZqPtadEpk47PQ (The Youtube channel… I will do the book club’s discussions and many other interesting videos and talks in this channel.)

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/ (A blog focused on great fanfiction series that extend very popular shows with more high-quality stories; so far, the ones covered are The Matrix, Naruto, Attack on Titan, and there is one alternate story for Star Wars episode 8.)

https://www.facebook.com/AuthorPedroCristobal/ (The Facebook page with soundtracks, pictures, and extra content for the stories—both originals and fanfiction. If you like music and original soundtracks (ost’s), like I do, you will love this page. This page will also have a few pictures from the author.)

https://twitter.com/Sage_Pedro (Pedro Cristobal’s Twitter)

 

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Introduction to this Page:

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It’s time to organize everything at the top of the page for everyone—specially for anyone who is new because they will get lost trying to find chapters or episodes among the hundreds of posts. Here you have “teaser trailers” and links for all the stories that I’ve posted so far.

I consider this soundtrack a “theme song” that I like for my repertoire of stories as a whole:

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8O0tqHN6b-w)

It’s a great soundtrack that fits adventure, epic events, inspiring characters, and great stories that reach the heart…

Enjoy the music and the epic stories that I will share 😉

 

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The Original Stories:

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Project H

(original sci-fi book, thriller #1)

TEASER TRAILER:

A scientifically advanced, human-like, and pacific race from the Andromeda Galaxy starts its exploration beyond the two nearby solar systems that it occupies so far…

Two explorers from this race go to a newly discovered “Red” planet, where an unknown and powerful energy source has been detected.

Soon they find that the source of the energy is an incredibly powerful race of red beings that threaten AND destroy all other forms of higher life in their vicinity. Then, the explorers and their ship are captured in space, and their technologies are copied through unknown means.

The hostile race was powerful and advanced in weaponry and in the essence of their biology, but a little behind in terms of space travel. However, with the ship of the Hellian explorers, the terrible being that controls the Rednian race has found a new way to travel to the other systems in Andromeda.

The Hellians are extremely advanced in terms of medicine, biology, and genetics. They have also made some great advancements in space travel with their new “biological ship,” known as the “space-travel biosphere.” However, they are far behind in means of warfare and mass destruction, due to their pacific nature.

When their main planet finds out about the threat at hand, it is already too late. The Red plague has invaded their second solar system and the Rednian beings are on their way to their main planet.

With weapons that cannot compete, human-like bodies that can’t defeat the strange Red beings, and wonderful advances that are meant to heal rather than to destroy, their extinction seems imminent, and so does the take over of Andromeda by the mysterious race of amoebic beings.

With the end on sight, Dionisa, the worshiped “daughter of God” of the Hellians (a Jesus-Christ-like female prophet) reveals a long-lost-and-well-hidden truth to the Secret Organization for Global Order at planet Hellia. Her truth not only changes everything that they believed to be true about themselves but gives them a chance at saving their species as well…

Dionisa’s revelation and their salvation card is “Project H”… the secret of their creator.

But, the uncertainty remains, will the mythic “Project H” be enough to save their species and to create other brotherly species that will be able to destroy the Rednian plague? Only time and the events in this book will tell…

Join the makers of “Project H” in a story of universal proportions that will take you from Andromeda, to the Milky Way, to the place where the owner of the multiverse lives, and back to the center of the storm…

“Project H” is an original sci-fi thriller that I will share for free, even though it could be a very successful sci-fi book in sales. I have many more that I do plan to publish, so don’t ever think that the epicness ends with Project H. This is just one initial taste of what can be expected from Pedro Cristobal’s imagination. For the rest, I do plan to share their initial 30% (the first few chapters) in my sites and the complete versions will be published. By the time you read the first one-third, you will know without any doubt if the story is one of your new favorites or not; thus, you will know that you are getting something that you will enjoy very much, in the finished experience. It’s like letting you watch the first Avengers movie for free and giving you the remaining parts (Infinity War 1 and 2) for the price of a sandwich. Everyone shall be happy. And with Project H that’s exactly what I’m doing, but, guess what… Project H’s sandwich will be free too. So I am guessing that my epic sandwich factory is going to become a favorite of many that feel the desire to have epic experiences, like I do (not with sandwiches, but with books).

Having an awesome AND memorable experience is my goal for what I pick to read at the new “Fun Fiction Book Club” AND for what I produce as a writer… ; )

See the posted entries for “Project H” here:

https://authorpedrocristobal.wordpress.com/original-stories/

I will start Project H in June of 2018, so be a little patient if we are still in June.

 

The River and the Mountain

(original short story #1)

This is an original short story that I thought about in 2014, when I started writing. You won’t find action, science-fiction, or romances in this one, but this is still quite interesting, thought-provoking, and inspiring. It’s also very short, so I won’t include “teaser info”… Read it and you will see what happens ; ). It reminds me of “The Alchemist” but it is just 3 pages long and completely different. This story is much more interesting than its title. “The River and the Mountain” is a “philosophical adventure” at heart:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2016/11/13/the-river-and-the-mountain-short-story-3-original-story-1/

 

 

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The Epic Fanfiction Section:

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TEASER TRAILER FOR “The Matrix Revelations”

(The 4th Matrix Film that I imagined in 2016, after seeing the whole trilogy a second time.)

Genre: Sci-fi/Fantasy Action-Thriller

Teaser Trailer:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2016/03/26/the-matrix-revelations-teaser-trailer/

Length and divisions for The Matrix Revelations:

9 parts, which are like 9 long chapters pretty much; each one covers various scenes, so every part has some new revelation that will keep viewers, or readers, hooked until the very end of the final part. This is waaay longer than my “Star Wars 8” script and I consider it much better as well, in terms of story, characters, and plot-twists. Sequel-wise, this “Matrix revival” blows the Star Wars revival out of the water. You will see… just after reading part 1, you can already tell that “The Matrix Revelations” is going to be some seriously epic stuff.

Enjoy!

LINKS to all the 9 parts and the extras (music and character themes) for The Matrix Revelations:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2017/11/02/the-matrix-revelations-complete-story-extras-a-truly-epic-sequel-for-the-matrix-revolutions/

 

The Matrix Revelations, Volume 2:

“THE END OF THE MATRIX”

Long story short, as great as “The Matrix Revelations” was, I realized that I still had enough content at the end to make a 5th and final story for the saga—one that was as good as the 1st Matrix Revelations story but still a true sequel. Then, I decided to conclude my “Matrix works” with the “epic end” that such a series deserved from the start. It was practice for my sci-fi storytelling skills, but what an epic practice it was ^_^

Here, I leave you the links to the teaser trailer for “The End of the Matrix” and the first episode in the story. You can get to the later episodes by following the links at the bottom right, after you finish with episode 1 and the trailer.

REMEMBER THAT YOU NEED TO READ THE MATRIX REVELATIONS 1 FIRST. Check out the link above to read the 1st volume of ‘Revelations.’ This is its sequel:

Trailer:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/01/31/teaser-trailer-for-the-matrix-revelations-volume-2-the-end-of-the-matrix/

Links to the Episodes for THE END OF THE MATRIX:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/links-for-the-end-of-the-matrix-sequel-to-the-matrix-revelations/

 

 

OVERVIEW FOR “The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf”

(my 1st full-length anime show / 1st ‘book series’)

Genre: Fantasy Action-Adventure

The earth-style ninja Pedro Namikaze chooses to leave his war-thirsty clan to join the clan of The Leaf, without knowing that his choice will change The Leaf, his world, the past, and the future forever… Read the epic story of the hero from The Leaf who was not one of its well-known leaders, known as Hokages, but who was a deep influence and a central character behind the entire saga… Learn about what happened in the past (a great prequel to Naruto) and see what will happen in the future (an awesome sequel, after “Boruto The Movie”)… Find out who is the true villain behind the whole saga (a new character)… Experience an all-new show that extends the Naruto universe on one hand and is a great standalone story on the other. Previous plot holes will be answered; new villains and heroes will be revealed; the other realms (the worlds of the summoned animals) will be visited; and the ancient past of Naruto’s Human Realm will be uncovered in “The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf”…

Length and divisions for The Story of the Earth Sage of The Leaf:

84 episodes or chapters;

6 arcs with approximately 12 episodes for each of the first five and 24 episodes for the final arc, which is the best one;

2 seasons, one 51 episodes long and the other one 33 episodes long. This is in “show terms.” In “book terms” it has the length of three books (between 1,000 and 2,000 pages).

I started to write this as if it was a book-sequel to the whole Naruto series, and as my very first “practice book.” This is where it all began for me…

I imagined it as a full-length TV anime series, so my chapters are the episodes that I already “saw.”

Enjoy!

Naruto fan or not, this is a great fantasy-adventure with plenty of ninjas and action. And you do not need to watch the original show to understand this one.

LINKS to the Arcs and Episodes for THE STORY OF THE EARTH SAGE OF THE LEAF:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/links-for-the-story-of-the-earth-sage-of-the-leaf/

 

Alternate Version for Star Wars Episode VIII’s Story

(short story #1 / movie script #1)

Genre: Sci-fi/Fantasy + Action-Adventure Drama

A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…

STAR WARS, The New Jedis

LINK to the full movie script:

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2016/01/17/short-story-1-star-wars-episode-viii-fan-made-movie-script/

 

(New Prelude for Attack on Titan)

TEASER FOR “Heroes of the Survey Corps: Alex Emmerson”

https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/introduction-or-opening-for-heroes-of-the-survey-corps-alex-emmerson-a-prelude-to-attack-on-titan/

Length and divisions for  “Heroes of the Survey Corps”

This is basically a full prelude season for Attack on Titan. I will do it in book form, but I imagined it as a real anime series. It will be 38 episodes long. What happens in each episode would fit in 20 minutes if it was animated. Furthermore, it fits with the whole series and ends right before the beginning of Season 1’s episode 1. It is a true prequel—in the same way that The Matrix Revelations is a true sequel. It even has kid Erwin as one of the secondary characters in the second half. And kid Levi appears in one of the episodes.

LINKS to the episodes in Heroes of the Survey Corps:

heroesofthesurveycorps.wordpress.com

 

TEASER TRAILER FOR “Jack Sparrow and the Cursed Crown”

(short story #2 / movie script #2)

Genre: Action-Comedy

After meeting an interesting lady at a new town, Captain Jack (Funny) Sparrow ends up causing a big ruckus with other pirates… To escape, he and the lady get into a disguised pirate ship that was about to depart. They had no idea of what would happen next… Captain Julio Reaper’s ambition—the legendary crown of the infamous Pirate King—was going to end up causing Jack several changes of underwear… Will Captain Sparrow save the day?

Divisions for Captain Sparrow’s funny thriller:

6 Acts, as if it was a play, but I imagined it as a movie (I was tired of watching Pirates of the Caribbean films that didn’t make me laugh, when Jack Sparrow is supposed to be a living bag of epic laughs, so I came up with something to make me laugh with this character for real. This action-comedy was the result.)

LINK to Act I of “Jack Sparrow and the Cursed Crown”  https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2016/02/17/short-story-2-jack-sparrow-causes-a-ruckus-action-comedy/

 

 

And many more awesome stories 😉 !!!

 

I will publish my true best (my originals) and share the rest (the fanfiction series) with everyone. “The rest” is amazing fanfiction that would work wonderfully to make real shows, great movies, or epic games out of it. So don’t ever think that I will share bad stuff for free; I am going to share ENTERTAINING stories ONLY ; ). There’s plenty more to see—or rather, to read—from me.

Fans of movies, anime, and entertainment that like adventure, action-thrillers, action-dramas, great thought-provoking sci-fi, some fantasy elements, and epicness in general will enjoy what I do here. Cheers to all !!!

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EXTRAS!!

Author’s Initiation as a Storyteller:
https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/authors-journey-or-initiation-but-journey-sounds-more-epic-_/

Plan for the Stories:
https://theearthsageoftheleaf.wordpress.com/2018/04/06/authors-plan-for-the-stories/

Annnd… for those of you that want to add me as a friend in facebook, I will make it possible ; ).

Just read this entire entry and you will know what to do to add me there:

(https://www.facebook.com/AuthorPedroCristobal/posts/1072687402840052)

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ALL-in-1 Post (Author Pedro Cristobal)

Author’s Comment #24

I am going to share this here as well. You will see what was going through my mind in 6/11/17 when I wrote that lol… Boring books just put me to sleep, end of the story : p. I really need entertaining stuff to stay engaged when it comes to reading. And most important of all, no disappointing endings are allowed : p. It’s terrible to reach the end of a very long story or series just to see that it was given a very mediocre ending (in some cases, no ending at all was given, they leave it “to the reader’s interpretation,” which is probably the worst possible way to end a series—if you ask me). That’s not my style. I love it when the stories are great and the endings are better (yes, even better). And by “better,” I don’t necessarily mean very happy, what I mean is very satisfying, which means that those who liked it so far will not get slapped on the face at the end (that’s how terrible endings make me feel). On the contrary, they will feel that they gained a great experience, like when you visit a place you liked, or when you meet a great new person, or when you beat a game that becomes one of your top favorites on the spot… Such is the power of the experience delivered by a truly great story. It is on the same level as any other big experience, yet, it also gets into realms, minds, and outcomes, which, perhaps, no other experience had ventured into yet… It can turn out to be a truly marvelous thing…

Author’s Comment #24

Author’s Comment #23

I will share this here too. For those of you that want to have me as a real friend in facebook (by being able to add me from my true facebook profile, which is not the author’s page) check out this summary post below and see the 2 links at the very end. Read those two and you will know exactly what to do… Even those that don’t add me will still be able to see part of my personal profile.

I decided to give this option to those that want to befriend me—because they see a great like-minded friend in me—based on what I have done so far.

Read those 2 final links in the big post below (from my author’s page) and you will know all the details and why I decided to do this… (Click on “See More” in the box below, then, scroll down to the end to see the two links.)

Author’s Comment #23